Nice! I like it. Nice twist with the girl being an ex-GC.
Couple thoughts struck me while reading it:
Did you hear about the company making a physics chip for video games? clicky
I would think the "secondarys" would be specialized. Eg one for data storage, one for modeling and stats calcuations, and maybe one for physics. ;)
The second thing is, you've given the main character these great abilities, but we don't get to see them in action. I assume that will show up in later chapters tho.
Thanks! I'm having fun writing it. I'm working on the last chapter right now.
There may be other stories in this universe and with these characters, but I don't have to work out a novel length, so I'm just working short stories for now. The world building I'm doing has three periods for doing stories - pre-singularity, at the singularity, and long, long post-singularity. A Vernor Vinge or Charles Stross type approach.
This story (obviously) is pre-singularity, and is in the early days of the trans-human movements. Next one will probably be same characters, but with their augs intact - that'll be fun to write if I can come up with an idea. I'll definitely use the physics chip idea - thanks.
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Nice! I like it. Nice twist with the girl being an ex-GC.
Couple thoughts struck me while reading it:
Did you hear about the company making a physics chip for video games? clicky
I would think the "secondarys" would be specialized. Eg one for data storage, one for modeling and stats calcuations, and maybe one for physics. ;)
The second thing is, you've given the main character these great abilities, but we don't get to see them in action. I assume that will show up in later chapters tho.
Thanks! I'm having fun writing it. I'm working on the last chapter right now.
There may be other stories in this universe and with these characters,
but I don't have to work out a novel length, so I'm just working short
stories for now. The world building I'm doing has three periods for
doing stories - pre-singularity, at the singularity, and long, long
post-singularity. A Vernor Vinge or Charles Stross type approach.
This story (obviously) is pre-singularity, and is in the early days of
the trans-human movements. Next one will probably be same characters,
but with their augs intact - that'll be fun to write if I can come up
with an idea. I'll definitely use the physics chip idea - thanks.
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